The Universe Can Wait - A Poem by Qudsia Pervez & Benjamin David Aptaker
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Listen to this music; it was Ben's choice and I think it fits with the poem perfectly.
Introduction to the poem
Ben and I wrote this poem together as a collaboration and honestly it just came out of nowhere, I guess that is what makes us love this poem so much. Ben commented on my last poem and we decided to do something together, and this little miracle was created over facebook chat. That shows everyone that we are not wasting time on Facebook, are we Ben?
P.S: The lines in bold-italic are the ones by Ben.
Everyone you just HAVE to follow and read Ben's works his hubpages name is BenWritings.
I had my beloved Ragnar in mind while transpiring this poem and I am sure Ben has a fine young lady who inspires his thoughts.
The poem begins from here:
Strands of hair etched into her skin,
Like coats of darkness covering her from within,
Her reflection was blurred within his vision,
A charming rendition of beauty befell him,
She felt her senses aspire to dream,
A dream of the one she seeks,
With each deep breathing her senses come alive,
What is this pulsating sensation that overcomes her entire body?
A dream so very convincing as this;
Must have some purpose outside of this bliss;
Two heartbeats make rhythm,
Converging into a melodic reality,
This unknown melody sings deep within her heart,
Almost as if she heard it from centuries ago,
Amongst the green fields running and playing,
Why was this sound not foreign to her?
Perchance a past life, or the death of a memory?
Infatuated by energy,
Swept in the moment,
They both knew somehow,
This was not their first meeting,
An enchanting experience took over her soul,
What was this experience?
What was this feeling that over came upon her being;
Did he feel like she did?
How would she ever tell him?
That she loved him even though perhaps she knew him not?
Familiarity must not be cast aside,
For one never knows what is fated in life,
As they melted together,
Through their gateways of eyes,
They both came to be;
A new creature entirely,
His touch upon her soul,
Melted like a fragrance that would enchant each onlooker,
Creating a scent that would attract all and then some,
An explosion of emotion;
The souls dancing the dance;
Their eyes mere portals opening new horizons,
Over the edge,
Into new heights of feeling,
Unknown yet inviting,
Not only physically,
But spiritually blending,
A dream, they did dream, and together they bathed;
In the vast pools of pleasure of which they were gifted,
This passion where does it come from?
How does it begin?
She knows not him;
Yet she feels entwined to him;
Her soul etched into his;
His into hers;
What divine magic took place here;
Was it the work of angels or demons?
How fine is the line between darkness and light?
When it comes to the art of seduction and love
Could the angels and demons be but one and the same
In this passion of senses and scents, they bask in
Is it dark within light or rays of light invading the dark?
The sounds and senses of passion over take the silence of the night,
Where angels exist not;
And demons possess no power;
Where bodies remain not bodies;
And souls seek redemption from the fire within,
Redeem us not, deity, from this moment we share
Just allow us to be here, and exist, till it ends
And when it all ends,
She looks into his eyes,
With all that familiar look;
He returns the look with a smile,
Looks like the dance continues,
The universe would have to wait.
Copyright © Qudsia Pervez & Benjamin David Aptaker
November 21, 2011
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This work was beautifully orchestrated by the two of you talented scribes. I felt the love, the connection and the Universe working in harmony with your souls. I loved the choice of music Ben and both your words balanced and fed off one another. Well done Bravo, rate up and awesome and pressed all your buttons.
Saddle, I love when you press my buttons :D lol Thank you so much for being the first comment. We both loved this for sure.
A beautiful streaming dance of dark and light Qudsia and Ben.;)
A sparkling collaboration! Very much enjoyed reading it. Thanks to both of you.
What a wonderful way to collaborate! Thanks, Ken for sharing the link that led me to this intriguing work.
Two styles trying to mesh, just like first love experience. Very interesting and enjoyable!
Excellent work. Ben I'm jealous... QudsiaP1 is so beautiful... I like the line "She felt her senses aspire to dream" and "...vast pools of pleasure" says it all....
haha, you know how we roll, Mark...we roll in that dreamy pleasure pool man
Alright that's cool... I was your age once and the waters overflowed the banks of sins warning as passion does not observe cautionary tales.... keep the good times rolling man...
lol :]
Beautiful job on both of your parts. One verse just melted into the next perfectly. Voted up and beautiful!
Thank you very much exotic :]
Ben, as always, your work is beyond excellence. You two collaborated amazingly, and look what it turned out to be, AN AWESOME POEM! :)
I had no young lady in mind. I have decided to turn gay. lol...
No, but really, Qudsia certainly wasn't thinking of me ;] I'm just a young'n
Two broken hearts, one now healed and one still very raw came together and produced the melody of a love few will ever experience, but once tasted, will never be forgotten.
Beautifully written, both of you!
A great mixture of words and feelings, by two extremely talented writers! Amazing! I love it!
That is a beautiful collaboration. Hurt and healed. Lost love proven love.
Absolutely beautiful. The great creative minds when united is a very powerful force!!! Thank you!
It's so nice to see hubbers collaborating creatively! What a beautiful work you have composed. I enjoyed reading the dance between the characters, lovely and mysterious.





















BenWritings Level 3 Commenter 6 months ago
Love the way it turned out, and love how you set up the Hub. Thanks, it was fun :]