Wings Wide Open
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Magnificence erupting from each pore,
Befouling, bewildering, staring till no more,
Common to the common eye,
Significant to all but those who deny,
Seeking refuge from every element,
Awareness of repercussions yet leaving prints in the cement,
Peaking exploration ensuing much to discover,
Miles worth of distance left to uncover,
Epiphany resolved,
Conflict dissolved,
Climaxed beginnings paramount,
Wings wide open, only one journey left to count.
Copyright © Qudsia Pervez
March 5, 2011
13:52
My other hubs include:
- My Betrothed - A Poem
Eg elski teg Ragnar - 14 hours ago
- Your Hand In Mine - A Poem
To be held is an innate need within us; we have been integrated with this idea ever since we were cradled and it is when we find ourselves wrapped by a stronger hand that we can find the peace each of us seek. - 11 days ago
- The Struggle To Victory - A Poem
If you struggle victory is yours; there always will be a pair of eyes who will see you victorious. - 5 weeks ago
- In Wait - A Poem
In wait lies the passage of time so silent so still; has it passed yet? - 6 weeks ago
- Cruel Rose - A Poem
This poem is dedicated to the two people closest to my heart. - 7 weeks ago
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Thanks so much Pooh. :)
It means so much whenever you stop by. :)
I thought I was following before and found I was not - I fixed that right away. I don't want another thing you write to slip past me. I often read and vote but don't always leave comments, but rest assured I am reading!
Dearest Pooh,
Thank you so much for the fan mail you left me, it was beyond beautiful it made me feel so overwhelmed. Some times when I write, the words, their meanings they all seem to hide behind a veil, one that I can not look through but when some one comes by. When some one comments, when some one shares their opinion about my words, it is like I finally see what the words mean.
Love,
Qudsia Pervez
Oh dear Pooh, thank you so much. :)
Dear Qudsia,
That blew me away! I love how the words flowed in utter beauty and stunning. And all I can say is WOW! Super work Darling Lady! I hope you continue with the beautiful poetry!
Blessings and hugs,
Laurie
Dearest Laurie,
Thank you so much. Your comment encourages me ever so much. :)
Love,
Qudsia Pervez
The generosity and vulnerability of wings wide open is apparent in your imagery. My journey to trust continues its plodding trek.
The dove (poet) has only one impediment left on the journey of a full life...wings wide open...mmmm.
Very good enigmatic imagery; fun interpreting this. Keep it up!! Bob
The dove, what an appropriate illustration, you choose. You two have so much in common! Inspirational, but then, your heart can do no other. Be well my friend.
What awesome poem, I felt that I was traveling in my mind, Oh how we all want to soar, and no more is there a common eye, all see through differnt glasses. I love this my dear friend. Rate up up up love & peace darski
Very beautiful - AGAIN - you are amazing:-)
Birds and flight represent freedom to fly away, or freddom to fly to something. I love the imagery, thank you for sharing.
Ahh, What a great flight you take us on... Thanks so much. Lovely and transmuting.
sligobay, thank you for stopping by and remember each journey is beautiful, there may be a few bumps but then there is a freeway.
Thank you Bob. :)
*chuckles
arb, you inspire me, thank you so much for your kind words. :)
Thank you so much Darlene Sabella. You are a beautiful person :)
RealHousewife, thank you so much. :)
Thank you for your lovely insight, A.A. Zavala. Thank you for stopping by. :)
Thank you Healing Touch, you are too kind. :)
hello my friend, you can call me darski because my friends call me that, and you are my friend. Love & peace Darlene
Beautiful!
Thank you Darski and you can call me 'Q' because that is what people closest to me call me. :)
Thank you PenMePretty. :)
Thank you! I love poetry - it just is an art I do not possess. All my poems sound like the ramblings of a child:-)!
RealHousewife it is 2:24 am here now, so I must go to sleep but when I wake up, I will go over your poems.
Honestly, should I let you in on a secret?
The best poem is the one you love and that is it. There are no standards to poetry, at least in my opinion because I believe if it is from your heart, it is beautiful.
Never under estimate yourself darling, I will make it top priority to go through your poems. :)
Do take care, love.
I agree, very beautiful and the journey is within sight.
Thank you Pollyannalana. :)
Poohgranma Level 6 Commenter 14 months ago
Q - this is absolutely tremendously awesome!